Prompt #86: Realistic or not?

This week’s prompt is brought to you by @Sir_Jaerls. You can also find him and his writing on his blog.

Many times we will read critiques about a piece of erotica, and whether or not the work is liked or hated, well written or 50 Shades of Random Typing, the same phrase will rise and fall like the one-eyed brainless head featured in the tale.

“It’s not realistic.”

Yeah, it’s not.  There’s a reason it’s not.  This challenge is to prove WHY erotica glamorizes the beast with two backs.  Write a story, or a paragraph or a note of the finest fantasy sexual encounter, and then do it again.  The second time, make is “real”: awkward, messy, stuck bra clasps, shoes with knots that can’t be undone, pauses, ouches and “did you finish?” “Wait, what are you doing?” “Should I get a towel?”

The first is the one we all wish to have, the other the one we’re afraid we’ll have.  Make it silly, make it fun, or make it tragic if you like.

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